Draft 2: Our Silence in the World We Build

Draft 2: Our Silence in the World We Build

alonso ramoran Offline

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03-15-2023, 03:11 AM

Thank you everyone for the feedback!

brynmawr1,

It wasn't a response, but I found that there were some nice connections in imagery with TqB's poem "Silent Response" XD

Mark,

How would you suggest I reword L5-6?

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Draft 2: Our Silence in the World We Build - by alonso ramoran - 03-13-2023, 08:03 AM

RE: Our Silence in the World We Build - by brynmawr1 - 03-13-2023, 11:11 AM

RE: Our Silence in the World We Build - by TranquillityBase - 03-14-2023, 01:52 AM

RE: Our Silence in the World We Build - by Mark A Becker - 03-14-2023, 10:24 AM

RE: Our Silence in the World We Build - by alonso ramoran - 03-15-2023, 03:11 AM

RE: Our Silence in the World We Build - by Mark A Becker - 03-15-2023, 04:36 AM

RE: Our Silence in the World We Build - by Miley - 03-16-2023, 05:32 PM

RE: Draft 2: Our Silence in the World We Build - by alonso ramoran - 03-18-2023, 11:24 AM

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