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Mid-Air

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but the cat came back the very next day

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03-10-2023, 08:23 AM

(03-10-2023, 08:05 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote:
(03-03-2023, 01:53 PM)Poetry In Motion Wrote: leaves drift mid-air,
its random swaying’s. their instead of its? their random swaying?
weighs me down. what about "pulls me down"?
TqB

Someone suggested on another board that I use 'that last line' as a twist.

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Mid-Air - by Poetry In Motion - 03-03-2023, 01:53 PM

RE: Mid-Air - by TranquillityBase - 03-10-2023, 08:05 AM

RE: Mid-Air - by Poetry In Motion - 03-10-2023, 08:23 AM

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