Quiet as a Mouse(new title)

Quiet as a Mouse(new title)

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#12

03-08-2023, 07:20 AM

Hi Brynmar

The poem seems to have more of a persistence than before. It builds up in small increments like I imagine was what you intended. The edits you've made have made that much clearer.

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Quiet as a Mouse(new title) - by brynmawr1 - 03-03-2023, 01:50 PM

RE: Death's Door - by Semicircle - 03-04-2023, 01:05 AM

RE: Death's Door - by brynmawr1 - 03-04-2023, 06:53 AM

RE: Death's Door - by dukealien - 03-04-2023, 04:52 AM

RE: Death's Door - by Mark A Becker - 03-04-2023, 10:08 AM

RE: Death's Door - by brynmawr1 - 03-04-2023, 10:29 AM

RE: Death's Door - by Mark A Becker - 03-04-2023, 11:01 AM

RE: Death's Door - by brynmawr1 - 03-04-2023, 11:15 AM

RE: Quiet as a Mouse(new title) - by 71degrees - 03-07-2023, 12:32 AM

RE: Quiet as a Mouse(new title) - by Mark A Becker - 03-07-2023, 06:54 AM

RE: Quiet as a Mouse(new title) - by brynmawr1 - 03-07-2023, 10:14 AM

RE: Quiet as a Mouse(new title) - by Semicircle - 03-08-2023, 07:20 AM

RE: Quiet as a Mouse(new title) - by TranquillityBase - 03-09-2023, 04:28 AM

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