Levitation

[TranquillityBase]

feeling them out with a mind
with too many loose wires.            here I think could do better than 'with', but again great line.  curious as to what you had in mind?

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Hi TqB,

Sorry just noticed your comments.

I was thinking something more descriptive, such as 'tangled by', 'shorted from/by', something like that to describe more what the "mind" was experiencing.

Those that can't do pontificate!

Great piece!

Well, it was some helpful pontification.