Quiet as a Mouse(new title)

[Mark A Becker]

Hey Steve-
Changing the title to “Quiet as a Mouse” and using mouse as a metaphor for Death could really work well.  I honestly thought that was where you going with this one, but the title would have been a dead give-away.

Hi Mark,
I like the title suggestion but I am not quite sure what you mean by the last bit of your comment.  Though I like the 'dead' reference. 

The title “Death’s Door” would be a ‘dead give-away’ if the poem used the mouse/death metaphor. Just a goofy pun comment of mine.