03-04-2023, 10:29 AM
(03-04-2023, 10:08 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: Hey Steve-Hi Mark,
Changing the title to “Quiet as a Mouse” and using mouse as a metaphor for Death could really work well. I honestly thought that was where you going with this one, but the title would have been a dead give-away.
I like the title suggestion but I am not quite sure what you mean by the last bit of your comment. Though I like the 'dead' reference.
