Untitled poem

[billy]

The brilliant sunset
the heavy rains
the harvested field
Together they brought
Fire in the Mud
The Reflection is more
than the sum of me
Be still my soul

©Bianca 12/01/09

The Reflection this works on more than one level for me . apart from the sunsets reflection, i also get a reflection into oneself.
the last line though a little cliche adds a certain cheekiness or should i say quirky, that while a little self indulgent takes the countryside and gives it your own (or the the person in the poem's) persona

normally i'd say heavy rain and brilliant sunset were cliche but i think in this piece they work.

i enjoyed the read, thanks for posting it Mimi