Raging in my mind

[Mark A Becker]

In My Mind

An anxious wind yowls
unsure in its direction
certain of its fury.

'yowls' is the correct word

In the spirit of the form (no titles), you could easily rearrange this one to include the title:

? ? in my mind  You just need a 2 syllable word here- I would suggest one, but it's not my poem.
unsure in its direction
an anxious wind yowls  This should be the penultimate line.           Do you mean ultimate line? Otherwise, needs two more syllables, as well.

Hmmmmm....
Easily is a subjective word!
'drive you coo-coo' indeed.

Oops- meant ultimate, as in last.
There are a couple of ‘…ing’ two syllable verbs that would work in the first line that are synonymous with ‘fury’.

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Raging in my mind
unsure in its direction
an anxious wind yowls

Way to go Steve!
I believe you've nailed it.