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How might I serve you? (new title)

How might I serve you? (new title)
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02-27-2023, 09:49 AM
(02-26-2023, 12:54 PM)brynmawr1 Wrote:  I guess it is supposed to be a little unsettling, cannibalism and all.  It's a work in progress.  Again, thanks for reading and commenting.
Bryn
Funny I didn't leap to cannibalism.  I saw it as more erotic.  I'm an oddball.
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Messages In This Thread
How might I serve you? (new title) - by brynmawr1 - 02-25-2023, 02:26 AM
RE: Love's Awful Consumption - by brynmawr1 - 02-26-2023, 12:54 PM
RE: Love's Awful Consumption - by TranquillityBase - 02-27-2023, 09:49 AM
RE: Love's Awful Consumption - by brynmawr1 - 02-27-2023, 10:04 AM
RE: Love's Awful Consumption - by 71degrees - 02-27-2023, 05:00 AM
RE: Love's Awful Consumption - by busker - 02-27-2023, 04:12 PM
RE: Love's Awful Consumption - by brynmawr1 - 02-28-2023, 01:20 AM
RE: Love's Awful Consumption - by Mark A Becker - 02-28-2023, 01:57 AM
RE: Love's Awful Consumption - by brynmawr1 - 03-02-2023, 05:17 AM
RE: What is the crime in loving... - by brynmawr1 - 03-03-2023, 07:56 AM
RE: What is the crime in loving... - by 71degrees - 03-06-2023, 05:27 AM
RE: What is the crime in loving... - by brynmawr1 - 03-07-2023, 09:28 AM
RE: What is the crime in loving... - by brynmawr1 - 03-09-2023, 09:26 PM



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