Levitation
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Hi Tim-

Since this is MISC, I'll just point out some phrases that stood out for me, without suggesting changes.

I poke around
old wounds,

feeling them out with a mind
with too many loose wires.


Take the dog to the park
sit with a hung jury of old menĀ 

time that makes a shadow
where my mind is still.


Interesting title, too. Thanks for this one,
Mark
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Messages In This Thread
Levitation - by TranquillityBase - 02-23-2023, 08:06 AM
RE: Levitation - by busker - 02-23-2023, 08:42 AM
RE: Levitation - by TranquillityBase - 02-25-2023, 07:22 AM
RE: Levitation - by brynmawr1 - 03-03-2023, 08:14 AM
RE: Levitation - by TranquillityBase - 03-05-2023, 10:56 AM
RE: Levitation - by Mark A Becker - 02-23-2023, 11:27 PM
RE: Levitation - by brynmawr1 - 02-24-2023, 09:06 AM



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