it's a job
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Interesting experiment Tim-
I stripped out a few lines, and added a simple 'won't', and made a little 5-7-5 poem. Or I should you made it, and I just stole it- all but one word:


the engine of tears
into rooted bottom land
won't grow a bone tree
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it's a job - by TranquillityBase - 02-13-2023, 11:00 AM
RE: it's a job - by Mark A Becker - 02-14-2023, 05:13 AM



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