What they saw Edit 1.0 (Mark, TqB)

What they saw Edit 1.0 (Mark, TqB)

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02-07-2023, 08:08 AM

Thanks, TqB and Mark. I thought workshopping this one would help progress it. I was not disappointed.

What I greatly appreciate is the amount of thought that went into the crits, despite the repeated readings caused by the 3 versions.

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RE: What they saw - by busker - 01-21-2023, 08:26 PM

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RE: What they saw - by busker - 02-01-2023, 11:45 PM

RE: What they saw Edit 1.0 (Mark, TqB) - by busker - 02-07-2023, 08:08 AM

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