What they saw Edit 1.0 (Mark, TqB)
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(02-05-2023, 09:20 AM)busker Wrote:  Thanks, TqB.
I’ve added a few footnotes on the references
Excellent.  I personally like footnotes and don't believe they take anything away from the enjoyment of a poem, even though my sense is that many readers find fault with the idea.

I agree with Mark regarding "tomb" instead of "womb" in section 1.  That would make the line accessible to me.

TqB
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What they saw Edit 1.0 (Mark, TqB) - by busker - 01-20-2023, 03:56 PM
RE: What they saw - by Mark A Becker - 01-21-2023, 08:58 AM
RE: What they saw - by busker - 01-21-2023, 08:26 PM
RE: What they saw - by TranquillityBase - 01-22-2023, 03:01 AM
RE: What they saw - by busker - 01-29-2023, 02:36 PM
RE: What they saw - by busker - 02-01-2023, 11:45 PM
RE: What they saw Edit 1.0 (Mark, TqB) - by TranquillityBase - 02-05-2023, 10:32 PM



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