02-05-2023, 10:32 PM
(02-05-2023, 09:20 AM)busker Wrote: Thanks, TqB.Excellent. I personally like footnotes and don't believe they take anything away from the enjoyment of a poem, even though my sense is that many readers find fault with the idea.
I’ve added a few footnotes on the references
I agree with Mark regarding "tomb" instead of "womb" in section 1. That would make the line accessible to me.
TqB

