02-05-2023, 10:25 AM
(02-05-2023, 08:31 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Well that's one way to appeal to my love of brevity. Well crafted. It's original and well worn at the same time. I almost want to strike the last line. I think you probably need it, but it reads well without it also.HA!-
Always looking for a way to do more with less, I second your suggestion, and have stricken the last line. I like the way the line lengths now shorten from 8 letters, to 7, to 6.
Thanks Paul,
Mark

