Phantom Pain Syndrome
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Hello degrees-
Within your piece I found another poem- a very shortened version of yours, with very slight changes. I hope you don't mind that I took liberties, degrees : 


Been there since last Sunday,
the unclaimed shoe, less
than a mile from home.
It’s still there the next Sunday.

One wonders where the foot went.
Maybe the shoe is an image for a poet
in search of innocence. I imagine
it was owned by a beautiful girl

I once knew- a mirage of lost virginity-
an abandoned shoe.
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Phantom Pain Syndrome - by 71degrees - 01-24-2023, 12:51 AM
RE: Phantom Pain Syndrome - by TranquillityBase - 01-24-2023, 11:17 PM
RE: Phantom Pain Syndrome - by 71degrees - 01-25-2023, 07:05 AM
RE: Phantom Pain Syndrome - by Mark A Becker - 01-25-2023, 11:20 PM
RE: Phantom Pain Syndrome - by 71degrees - 01-26-2023, 03:26 AM



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