01-25-2023, 11:11 PM
Yes, thank you both.
I have shortened this one even further, making it 5 syallables per line, instead of 6. Got rid of 'gnarled' but stuck with 'old' to retain the 'O' sounds. Changed the title, too.
I have shortened this one even further, making it 5 syallables per line, instead of 6. Got rid of 'gnarled' but stuck with 'old' to retain the 'O' sounds. Changed the title, too.