A few lines
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I started this a couple of days ago and have no ambition to keep it going. So I figured this is a good one to post for critiques.


(1-19-23)

moons shine
and suns rise
as stars wind upward
vines thrive
we stay alive and drink
down to an empty cupboard
Huh
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A few lines - by burrealist - 01-19-2023, 12:58 AM
RE: A few lines - by TranquillityBase - 01-19-2023, 10:20 AM
RE: A few lines - by busker - 01-19-2023, 04:25 PM
RE: A few lines - by Mark A Becker - 01-19-2023, 10:26 PM
RE: A few lines - by burrealist - 01-20-2023, 12:20 AM
RE: A few lines - by Mark A Becker - 01-20-2023, 01:43 AM



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