01-07-2023, 04:43 PM
(This post was last modified: 01-07-2023, 04:45 PM by RiverNotch.)
Hello,
Thanks again for the feedback, y'all! I'm still attached to the longer version, but I find much value in shortening it, too. The plan is to have both versions here, with the longer version "2.5" (and this version, having that last strophe follow Tqb's advice) and the shorter version the one continued to be worked on (or, at least, the version 3), and leave it to the (as of now hypothetical) final editor/publisher to choose. This has been the plan since I absorbed Mark's feedback before the new year, I just keep forgetting to post back -- pretty sure I have both versions in a txt file on my computer proper xD
Thanks again for the feedback, y'all! I'm still attached to the longer version, but I find much value in shortening it, too. The plan is to have both versions here, with the longer version "2.5" (and this version, having that last strophe follow Tqb's advice) and the shorter version the one continued to be worked on (or, at least, the version 3), and leave it to the (as of now hypothetical) final editor/publisher to choose. This has been the plan since I absorbed Mark's feedback before the new year, I just keep forgetting to post back -- pretty sure I have both versions in a txt file on my computer proper xD