Draft 2: Day Off

Draft 2: Day Off

alonso ramoran Offline

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01-03-2023, 03:56 AM

TqB,

Appreciate the suggestion! After a couple re-reads, I did start to notice that “poem of cliches” conveys more disappointment than endearment so I revised accordingly.

Best,
Alex

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Draft 2: Day Off - by alonso ramoran - 12-25-2022, 03:47 AM

RE: Day Off - by Erthona - 12-27-2022, 02:30 PM

RE: Day Off - by alonso ramoran - 12-28-2022, 04:34 AM

RE: Day Off - by TranquillityBase - 12-28-2022, 12:29 PM

RE: Day Off - by alonso ramoran - 01-02-2023, 03:06 AM

RE: Day Off - by TranquillityBase - 01-02-2023, 10:26 PM

RE: Draft 2: Day Off - by alonso ramoran - 01-03-2023, 03:56 AM

RE: Draft 2: Day Off - by brynmawr1 - 01-07-2023, 05:16 AM

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