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01-03-2023, 03:18 AM

Thanks aton for the feedback Tranquillity and Mark! I'm going to take those suggestions. Especially feeling out skimming it down. It was a little tricky to get that idea out without it being overly lengthy.

Hope both of you have having a good years start

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Half of me - by Bunx - 01-01-2023, 05:13 AM

RE: Half of me - by TranquillityBase - 01-01-2023, 08:53 PM

RE: Half of me - by Mark A Becker - 01-02-2023, 11:28 PM

RE: Half of me - by Bunx - 01-03-2023, 03:18 AM

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