12-27-2022, 02:30 PM
Velasco,
Reminds me some of "The Casque of Amontillado".
Overall good content as it has some nice originality about it.
Best,
dale
PS Sorry, I forgot that this was a non-crit forum. I've removed the crit and just left the comments, more or less.
Reminds me some of "The Casque of Amontillado".
Overall good content as it has some nice originality about it.
Best,
dale
PS Sorry, I forgot that this was a non-crit forum. I've removed the crit and just left the comments, more or less.
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.