(12-18-2022, 09:05 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote: It's not Simple, It's Interrupted
Trout-skinned clouds make a horizon of burning pink, a rainbow serpent who encircles the visible west.
My inviolate vision in a life without parole gathering its last flower.
Ashes and dust, a dead oak, an abandoned fire pit: walk into invisibility where night plays catch with the laughing dead.
v. 3 A cascade of syllables rolls down the sacred mountain. Yogis yawn and grin.
Trout-skinned clouds make a horizon of burning pink, a rainbow serpent who encircles the visible west.
These are my fellows, my inviolate visions in a life without parole gathering its final flowers.
Ashes and dust, a dead oak, an abandoned fire pit: walk into invisibility where night plays catch with the laughing dead.
v. 2
It’s not simple, it’s interrupted.
A cascade of syllables down the sacred mountains. Yogis yawn and grin.
Trout-skinned clouds strung out a horizon of burning pink a rainbow serpent encircling the visible west. These are my fellows, my inviolate senses a life without parole gathering its final flowers.
Where’s the signal? Ashes and dust, a dead oak, an abandoned fire pit. Walk into invisibility where night plays catch with the laughing dead.
v. 1
It’s not simple, it’s interrupted.
A cascade of syllables
an eruption of babes
down the sacred mountains.
Yogis yawn and grin.
Dragons drag shining bellies
across turquoise sands,
rivers dance in the sky
around mandalas of stars.
Where’s the signal?
Ashes and dust, a dead oak,
an abandoned fire pit.
The sun floods the day
drowns the innocent
in waves of transcendence.
Walk into invisibility
where night plays catch
with the laughing dead.
Let the evening fun commence:
trout-skinned clouds strung out
a horizon of burning pink,
a rainbow serpent
encircling the visible west.
These are my fellows,
my inviolate senses
a life without parole
gathering its final flowers.
Very cool new version Tim, and a BIG improvement. I really did like the previous title though- "Midnight at Radio Ranch" had a surreal vibe to it, and would work well with this version.
