Do You Remember?(edit)

[TranquillityBase]

 The phosphor flowers was my fancy way of indicating fireworks that we were able to see from high on a ridge looking down into the valley.  Very weird perspective.  Do I need to be less obscure there?
Take care,
steve

I took it literally, so perhaps something to indicate it's fireworks, not flowers.  "phosphor flowers" though is pretty neat, I'd hate to see that go.  Flows so smoothly into your last line, both sound/image wise.  Maybe just leave it alone.