Moon enters

[Tiger the Lion]

Moon enters 

Moon enters
through double glazed windows, hyphen double-glazed?
spreads on the smooth white sheet you might be able to improve on "spreads"
of my half empty bed.

I ponder her shepherd boy,
green, like the valleys(,) would prefer a comma here, 

(a)nd Tamino, inflamed with love
on a starry night

A few quibbles. Very much enjoyed.