10-22-2022, 03:46 AM
Thanks for the replies,
Yeah, you mostly read it how I intended it to be read CRNDLM, thank you... I wrote this last winter when I worked at a movie theatre and I'd see the homeless on my way to/from work. I wrote a lot of notes on my feelings/experiences of seeing the homeless between selling tickets, and the challenge has been figuring out which lines go to which poems, ill post a few more later probably. I'll space the lines out more.
Thanks Tranquil, maybe ill try to make the subject more explicit, probably wouldn't take too much?
Yeah, you mostly read it how I intended it to be read CRNDLM, thank you... I wrote this last winter when I worked at a movie theatre and I'd see the homeless on my way to/from work. I wrote a lot of notes on my feelings/experiences of seeing the homeless between selling tickets, and the challenge has been figuring out which lines go to which poems, ill post a few more later probably. I'll space the lines out more.
Thanks Tranquil, maybe ill try to make the subject more explicit, probably wouldn't take too much?