10-19-2022, 09:56 PM
(10-19-2022, 11:30 AM)Miley Wrote: beyond glassI agree with CRNDLSM about the spacing; exaggerate that a bit more. I had the same feeling of being on the street, outside a movie house, old style with the glassed in box office, late at night. Didn't make a connection to the homeless, but that's because I've not been in such an atmosphere in many a year.
businessmen’s great geometry
i can eat polished shoes down
the sidewalk dark
clot of blankets
could be a body
is a body
could be alive
could be
"I can eat polished shoes down
the sidewalk dark" is the heart of the poem for me.
I like it too.