box office

[CRNDLSM]

Why is it called box office? Not your poem, the movie tickets thing?

beyond glass I like this line I relation to the title
businessmen’s great geometry cubicles? There is some really amazing business architecture out there
i can eat     polished shoes     down I feel like you should space these out more like this since there's no punctuation.  You seem like the privileged worker walking past a homeless person's 'box' the Hobo's office
the sidewalk     dark feels like I'm walking pretty quickly at night making a quick observation of the contrast
clot of blankets clot is good too, like the homeless is dead or dying where you're alive
could be a body
is a body
could be alive
could be keep walking don't think too much about it, it's their business

At first because of the title, I thought this was too quick and short and didn't make sense.  Slowing down and reading each line slower definitely improved my reading, not exactly sure I read it right, I think if you spaced it out more it would slow down the reader and give each line more impact.  Thanks for sharing I like it