Sometimes, life is hard
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(10-09-2022, 10:03 PM)TranquillityBase Wrote:  
(10-08-2022, 02:50 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote:  Thanks TqB.  Sorry if I put you on the spot but it helps to know how the poem is interpreted.  I was a little confused by your comment on your favorite stanza!  I kept reading S3 thinking there was something in it I hadn't intended.  Ha!
There is one other character that I didn't make clear.  How about if I changed the title to "A Day in the Office"?  I'm terrible at titles.
Take care,
bryn
No worries.  Just always afraid I'll embarrass myself by totally misinterpreting the poem.

So, the title: as in A Day at the (Vet's) Office?    Yes
Poetry is very easy to misinterpret as it is often intentional ambiguous.  Hard to add details without making it too prosaic.  I'll see if I can tweak it to make the relationships more clear.
Thanks
bryn
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Messages In This Thread
Sometimes, life is hard - by brynmawr1 - 10-06-2022, 10:35 AM
RE: Sometimes, life is hard - by TranquillityBase - 10-07-2022, 10:01 AM
RE: Sometimes, life is hard - by brynmawr1 - 10-07-2022, 11:21 PM
RE: Sometimes, life is hard - by TranquillityBase - 10-08-2022, 12:13 AM
RE: Sometimes, life is hard - by brynmawr1 - 10-08-2022, 02:50 AM
RE: Sometimes, life is hard - by TranquillityBase - 10-09-2022, 10:03 PM
RE: Sometimes, life is hard - by brynmawr1 - 10-10-2022, 02:49 AM
RE: Sometimes, life is hard - by TrevorConway - 11-02-2022, 05:52 PM
RE: Sometimes, life is hard - by brynmawr1 - 11-03-2022, 06:06 AM



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