10-07-2022, 03:22 AM
Duke- Holy cow, I absolutely love the analysis of the poem. I never thought of creating a narrative about someone in an asylum, but it works so well.
Tranquility- I took some suggestions thank you aton. I feel like the I cannot change repetition is a play on words, reflecting a thought pattern. Like justifying your lifestyle contrary to beliefs.
On a random note my new goal with writing is too start reading my poems out loud in groups. So even a little feedback means aton
Tranquility- I took some suggestions thank you aton. I feel like the I cannot change repetition is a play on words, reflecting a thought pattern. Like justifying your lifestyle contrary to beliefs.
On a random note my new goal with writing is too start reading my poems out loud in groups. So even a little feedback means aton
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
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--mark twain
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