10-05-2022, 06:12 AM
(09-30-2022, 10:08 AM)Bunx Wrote: Systematic SentimentNicely expressed about being the only actual keeper in the asylum (in particular, watching the supposed docs do their varied things).
I feel ashamed.
Stability within survival,
Encouragement reflecting cliches.
Within a system built to prey.
I cannot change.
When you only know,
One route to safety.
Things usually stay the same.
Complaint reliance, silent surroundings.
I cannot change.
Silent shackles that bind us.
Delusions from the rich
slithers and thrives.
As the forest tries to survive.
I cannot change.
Ashamed in myself,
for endless interpersonal grace.
Trying to be the most stable,
of the the insane.
Keeping this roof over my head.
I cannot change.
That I want to shout about,
Hypocritical policies, government for sale.
Innocent prisoners without bail.
Police, hunting the sick without fail.
I'm afraid.
I cannot change.
Not in critique, really, but there appears to be a singular-plural mismatch (delusions ... slithers and thrives) - "rich" is also, collectively, plural. Tripped me up momentarily. Disregard if intentional.
And, just for the friend you're writing about... at some point the docs will give the only sane keeper the heave-ho (speaking from experience). Be prepared, which is to say, understand that you'll be just fine outside the Job. They only try to make being ejected seem like the end of the world to keep the rest of the keepers crazy.
Non-practicing atheist

