Birth of a Poet(edit) no new title yet

[Mark A Becker]

Hi Steve- I didn't change any words, but subtracted many. (ps. you need a new title):

Born with the sun
under a rose-dusted sky.

Caught between dream
and mind split;

a glimpse of what exists
at the seams of the world.

Standing before the mirror,
windows unshaded.

Whittled, cut to heartwood;
made beautiful?

Reborn to bleed; to hunger
for your own blood.