Aroma Therapy
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(10-02-2022, 12:42 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote:  
(09-30-2022, 10:58 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Aroma Therapy

her father’s humidor
 
the scent of cedar
and a lone Montecristo
he’d reserved for occasion
 
rise up to meet her
almost before she opens the lid
Hi Tiger,
I get some melancholy of a special cigar never smoked.  Putting 'almost' in the last line is striking to me.  Suggests a half forgotten memory of the father.  
Well done,
steve
Thanks Steve. Sometimes a somewhat simple word can be your best friend. In this case, I was asking "almost" to do quite a bit of work. Thanks for noticing.
Paul
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Aroma Therapy - by Tiger the Lion - 09-30-2022, 10:58 AM
RE: Aroma Therapy - by The Karate Kid Part 2 - 09-30-2022, 12:52 PM
RE: Aroma Therapy - by Tiger the Lion - 09-30-2022, 01:43 PM
RE: Aroma Therapy - by brynmawr1 - 10-02-2022, 12:42 AM
RE: Aroma Therapy - by Tiger the Lion - 10-02-2022, 06:29 AM



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