10-02-2022, 06:29 AM
(10-02-2022, 12:42 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote:Thanks Steve. Sometimes a somewhat simple word can be your best friend. In this case, I was asking "almost" to do quite a bit of work. Thanks for noticing.(09-30-2022, 10:58 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Aroma TherapyHi Tiger,
her father’s humidor
the scent of cedar
and a lone Montecristo
he’d reserved for occasion
rise up to meet her
almost before she opens the lid
I get some melancholy of a special cigar never smoked. Putting 'almost' in the last line is striking to me. Suggests a half forgotten memory of the father.
Well done,
steve
Paul
