Visual Aid

[Tiger the Lion]

A girl, 14 years young
decided she was done-
jumped in front of a train

I think back to the tracks and
the fragmented deer
that tried the same.

Isn't that a charming visual aid?

I feel like the last line is more flip than needed. What if you were to strike the last line and use "Visual Aid" in the title? Also, along the lines of KK's response, I think "and" before "jumped" would read better than the dash. (for fluidity)