10-02-2022, 05:48 AM
This is funny and depressing, at the same time—the two foundations of a good poem, in my opinion.
One minor (stylistic) criticism, I think the em dash (—) would be more appropriate after "done" rather than the en dash.
One minor (stylistic) criticism, I think the em dash (—) would be more appropriate after "done" rather than the en dash.

