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This is funny and depressing, at the same time—the two foundations of a good poem, in my opinion.
One minor (stylistic) criticism, I think the em dash (—) would be more appropriate after "done" rather than the en dash.
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Visual Aid - by Semicircle - 10-02-2022, 02:16 AM
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RE: Visual Aid - by Semicircle - 10-02-2022, 06:56 AM



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