Mijo (edit 3)

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I stare at a half-dark picture of you

you took it yourself
with that the old Olympus film camera

you have a beard
you’re not smiling

I try to read your face,
you look almost angry. I think a direct address would be strong here... 

I'm trying to read your face;
are you angry?

When I look into your eyes
I and pretend you can see me too.

Just my first thoughts. The term Mijo sold it for me before even my first read. 
Paul

Thanks Paul,

I was trying to make it as direct as possible.  So your suggestion on ll. 6-7 is a good one.  Thanks for the read.

Tim