09-30-2022, 02:04 PM
(09-30-2022, 01:43 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:I am probably just being slow. To be fair, I did have to look up some of the words (the names for cigars) so maybe that is distracting me from the overall concept of the poem. Not to mention I read "humidor" as "haemorrhoid" the first go-through—which entirely fucked my entire reading of it up. I wouldn't change it. It made me think. And the language is great. Which is entirely more than most poems usually do.(09-30-2022, 12:52 PM)The Karate Kid Part 2 Wrote:Not inappropriate at all. I'm not sure how much more to add that wouldn't turn vague into a beaten horse. I do love walking that tightrope though.(09-30-2022, 10:58 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Aroma TherapyWould it be inappropriate to ask what this is about? I know poets hate "explaining" their poems, but it's too abstract for me. I feel like I'm missing something. It can't be cigars... right?
her father’s humidor
the scent of cedar
and a lone Montecristo
he’d reserved for occasion
rise up to meet her
almost before she opens the lid
*did I use "entirely" more library than anyone ever should. Yes!

