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Love Hurts(edit)
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09-21-2022, 09:08 AM
The push and pull of the dynamic between the two is well constructed. One suggestion: I got hung up on the last stanza a bit with the two uses of know/knowing. Maybe “I remember” or “I surrender to…” Enjoyed the read. Cheers!
"What I want in poetry is a kind of abstract photography of the nerves, but what I like in photography is the poetry of literal pictures of the neighborhood." -John Koethe
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Love Hurts(edit) - by brynmawr1 - 09-21-2022, 07:46 AM
RE: Love Hurts - by ZHamilton - 09-21-2022, 09:08 AM
RE: Love Hurts - by brynmawr1 - 09-21-2022, 09:16 AM
RE: Love Hurts - by TranquillityBase - 09-22-2022, 05:37 AM
RE: Love Hurts - by brynmawr1 - 09-22-2022, 11:31 AM
RE: Love Hurts - by Mark A Becker - 09-22-2022, 06:08 AM
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