09-21-2022, 05:20 AM
(09-21-2022, 04:58 AM)Semicircle Wrote:It's for sure the story of every soldier who fought in one of the big (or small) Revolutions in our history. I'll actually add one other thing: maybe move "of freedom" to be the last line.(09-18-2022, 08:58 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote:Thanks for catching that. Also, someone mentioned that everyone ends out like this, freed from the pursuit. What was the significance of the soldier's death then?(09-18-2022, 07:48 AM)Semicircle Wrote: Pon of dictatorshipDid you mean "pawn" in first word of poem?
and rebellion
died liberated
from the pursuit of freedom
Other than that, I like the epitaph style of the poem.

