Soldier
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(09-18-2022, 08:58 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote:  
(09-18-2022, 07:48 AM)Semicircle Wrote:  Pon of dictatorship
and rebellion 
died liberated
from the pursuit of freedom
Did you mean "pawn" in first word of poem?
Other than that, I like the epitaph style of the poem.
Thanks for catching that. Also, someone mentioned that everyone ends out like this, freed from the pursuit. What was the significance of the soldier's death then?
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Soldier - by Semicircle - 09-18-2022, 07:48 AM
RE: Soldier - by TranquillityBase - 09-18-2022, 08:58 AM
RE: Soldier - by Semicircle - 09-21-2022, 04:58 AM
RE: Soldier - by TranquillityBase - 09-21-2022, 05:20 AM



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