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09-18-2022, 08:58 AM

(09-18-2022, 07:48 AM)Semicircle Wrote: Pon of dictatorship
and rebellion
died liberated
from the pursuit of freedom

Did you mean "pawn" in first word of poem?
Other than that, I like the epitaph style of the poem.

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Soldier - by Semicircle - 09-18-2022, 07:48 AM

RE: Soldier - by TranquillityBase - 09-18-2022, 08:58 AM

RE: Soldier - by Semicircle - 09-21-2022, 04:58 AM

RE: Soldier - by TranquillityBase - 09-21-2022, 05:20 AM

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