09-15-2022, 04:49 AM
(09-15-2022, 03:26 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: On the WallHi Mark,
A mirror’s intrusion
dispels all illusions
of youth.
It’s merely reflecting
while I try deflecting
the truth.
Another good one! Only two thoughts. Maybe add an 's' to intrusion or remove from illusions. I was also kicking around changing 'illusions' to 'delusions'. A little different connotation.
Thanks for sharing,
steve