Day of orange sun
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Thanks Tiger and S3. The poem was pretty compact so not too much room for error I assume.
Any critique is appreciated.
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Day of orange sun - by Semicircle - 09-07-2022, 12:40 PM
RE: Day of orange sun - by brynmawr1 - 09-07-2022, 10:38 PM
RE: Day of orange sun - by Semicircle - 09-08-2022, 03:44 AM
RE: Day of orange sun - by s3 - 09-09-2022, 10:28 PM
RE: Day of orange sun - by Tiger the Lion - 09-09-2022, 10:53 PM
RE: Day of orange sun - by Semicircle - 09-10-2022, 12:26 AM



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