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One more thing before you leave
don't go messing with things
you don't wanna be
Mama told me don't go
you know were gonna grow
I know I been down
where the ol' river flowed
As the story goes
Ol nick went out there on his own
He went out alone in the night time
They found his row boat oh Lord
He never came home
how he died no one knows
they couldn't find anything
Oh Nick whered you go
He drowned according to authorities
He drowned somewhere underground
They sent out the hounds
You'll never go home
oh Nick whered you go?
When you died you went out that night
No one by your side ones you leave behind
Whered you go Nick?
no one knows
they just know you died
Hope you find your way home
It's been a while since anyone has posted in intensive, this is a song I'm working on. I'm working on it as in i read that a friend had died from high school and I improvised this back woods kinda dirge in response. Even though it's relatively senseless, it evokes emotion in me . It repeats so much I don't know how to sharpen it, I don't expect a line by line, but maybe someone else will post in intensive the share some feedback
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One more thing before you leave
Don't go messing with anything
You don't wanna be
Mama told me don't go
Mama told me don't go
And you know we gone grow
Told me don't go
You prolly don't grow
Your body don't blow oh
You don't grow
I know been down there ol edin flow
The bayou in the garwhew and avenue though
As the story goes
Ol nick went out there on his own in his row boat
He went out alone in the night time with no one at his side
They found his row boat oh Lord
He went out at night all alone in his row boat
And never came home his brothers called the authority
But they couldn't find anything his row boat was all alone
Now how he died no one knows he went out alone
In his rowboat
He told his brothers where he was going but he never came home
Oh Nick whered you go he went home
He went home when he died that night
He drowned according to authority
He drowned somewhere underground
They looked all around and no one found
Nick drowned and no one found him though they looked all around
They sent out the hounds he went underground
When he drowned now he's going home
Never go home oh Nick where dyu go
When you died you went out that night
No one by yourside what you leave behind
Nick died he went out alone in his row boat
And he never came home
Where dyu go Nick no one knows
Where'd you go when you went out that night
No one by your side they just know you died
Hope you find your way home
Hope you find your way way way home.
One more thing before you leave
don't go messing with things
you don't wanna be
Mama told me don't go
you know were gonna grow
I know I been down
where the ol' river flowed
As the story goes
Ol nick went out there on his own
He went out alone in the night time
They found his row boat oh Lord
He never came home
how he died no one knows
they couldn't find anything
Oh Nick whered you go
He drowned according to authorities
He drowned somewhere underground
They sent out the hounds
You'll never go home
oh Nick whered you go?
When you died you went out that night
No one by your side ones you leave behind
Whered you go Nick?
no one knows
they just know you died
Hope you find your way home
It's been a while since anyone has posted in intensive, this is a song I'm working on. I'm working on it as in i read that a friend had died from high school and I improvised this back woods kinda dirge in response. Even though it's relatively senseless, it evokes emotion in me . It repeats so much I don't know how to sharpen it, I don't expect a line by line, but maybe someone else will post in intensive the share some feedback
Original
One more thing before you leave
Don't go messing with anything
You don't wanna be
Mama told me don't go
Mama told me don't go
And you know we gone grow
Told me don't go
You prolly don't grow
Your body don't blow oh
You don't grow
I know been down there ol edin flow
The bayou in the garwhew and avenue though
As the story goes
Ol nick went out there on his own in his row boat
He went out alone in the night time with no one at his side
They found his row boat oh Lord
He went out at night all alone in his row boat
And never came home his brothers called the authority
But they couldn't find anything his row boat was all alone
Now how he died no one knows he went out alone
In his rowboat
He told his brothers where he was going but he never came home
Oh Nick whered you go he went home
He went home when he died that night
He drowned according to authority
He drowned somewhere underground
They looked all around and no one found
Nick drowned and no one found him though they looked all around
They sent out the hounds he went underground
When he drowned now he's going home
Never go home oh Nick where dyu go
When you died you went out that night
No one by yourside what you leave behind
Nick died he went out alone in his row boat
And he never came home
Where dyu go Nick no one knows
Where'd you go when you went out that night
No one by your side they just know you died
Hope you find your way home
Hope you find your way way way home.
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