Draft 3: Forever Legacy

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Let conquerors who taste every spring, why conquerors? The spring makes me think seasons, like they live a long time to enjoy decent weather? Then reading expecting youth I get the fountain image of a spring.  I was thinking fountain instead of spring but spring is better, plus conquerors wandering would drink from springs, but do they drink from every spring?  And then I thought why conquerors?  Because conquistadors search for the fountain of youth?  And they have to taste each in case it's the one.
expecting youth, turn to dead marble—  a statue good, lots of people get turned into statues, memories, not just conquerors, but they are all conquerors in a way.  Let them become statues, great, but only the ones who look for the fountain?  
I'll leave your memory are you the conqueror, like, let me leave to find my fountain, but the statue is like the memory, 
in rainbows that smell of hose water I can taste this line, I am outside as a kid enjoying probably the spring time
to forget you in the way ill leave your memory, I'll forget you, just different enough, I like 'you in the way' get out of my way
the wind remembers breath. This is a beautiful line, the wind picks up the breath and moves it, becomes one with it, dispelling it, I am the wind, you are the breath, if I forget you, and the memory is the statue, you must be telling yourself to let the 'you' who wants to live forever to run off and do it, because you don't want to live forever? The hose water is behind you, Im not a child anymore.

This short piece is pretty packed with thought.  Could be cut shorter, could be extended, but it's pretty concise and sweet sounding.  This reminds me of a fancy dinner entree that I should have eaten an appetizer with and might need to have dessert.  I don't know what else to say it's been up here a while.