08-19-2022, 01:12 PM
(08-17-2022, 09:55 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote:I gave it my best, thanks for the advice.(08-17-2022, 09:25 AM)Semicircle Wrote: Thanks for the critiques you guys, I often like the crutch of being vague. I'll do some editing.maybe you can use the title to provide some context without having to manipulate the poem too much.
take care,
bryn

