08-11-2022, 10:26 PM
I like this poem, it reminds me of a bloodstain or a memory of a tragedy. It'll always be there in that spot even if its been cleaned and wiped away. Trying to hide it even though it's not there, but you can see through the carpet.
(08-01-2022, 01:09 PM)Semicircle Wrote: Hidden under the carpet, a mark–It's short and open to interpretation and more or less fixed to the point, I don't have any suggestions for edit
Turn away, and it’s gone. Face your past
Look under, it will disappear. need closure
The mark is there–
When you get up close,
it’ll whisper in your ear, all those memories
and tell you all the nice things
you want to hear. The denial
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches

