08-05-2022, 07:08 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-05-2022, 07:10 PM by Tiger the Lion.)
(08-05-2022, 06:37 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote: I sit on the Delaware shore asForgive me, but I can't help wishing the title was "Shore Lunch." (except that "shore" is already in L1)
my toes investigate the sand. Above,
Osprey soar on grey-white speckled wing.
Tucked, they plunge with fierce precision
piercing the shimmering blue;
reborn they rise, a meal of silver gleam
tight in their talon.
The raptors climb on
amid the shriek and holler
of sandy, tanned children.
Salted in surf, they eat till they’ve
had their fill, sustained by every wave.
Also, would move "as" down to L2.
Nice images.