Beach Vacation

[brynmawr1]

Today I woke early
to dawn's fertile horizon
blooming a flower mature.   I imagine an orange sun nestled between tropical hills.      Only the tropics of Delaware, I'm afraid!

Bees such as me,
on the shore
buzzing their adoration.    Drop the "ing"

Sorry for lack of critique, these were the only things that occured to me.

Cheers for the read,
Sc

Hi Sc,
No need to apologize.  Just a little thing that occurred to me.  I agree with your comment.
Take care,
bryn