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Woodview Avenue 1960
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07-22-2022, 12:36 AM
(07-16-2022, 08:47 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote: I'm not happy with "time to flee or make a final stand" in the second (your order) or last stanza (my order). But so far no one else objected to it. But it bugs me for some reason.Hey Tim, Maybe you could say something like, "time to tuck tail and run, or make a final stand". I must admit, it's hard to think like our six year old selves, and make it believable. Mark |
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Woodview Avenue 1960 - by TranquillityBase - 07-09-2022, 12:51 AM
RE: Woodview Avenue 1960 - by Torkelburger - 07-09-2022, 06:05 AM
RE: Woodview Avenue 1960 - by brynmawr1 - 07-09-2022, 06:54 AM
RE: Woodview Avenue 1960 - by TranquillityBase - 07-09-2022, 07:24 PM
RE: Woodview Avenue 1960 - by brynmawr1 - 07-09-2022, 10:28 PM
RE: Woodview Avenue 1960 - by Mark A Becker - 07-10-2022, 12:39 AM
RE: Woodview Avenue 1960 - by TranquillityBase - 07-10-2022, 10:32 PM
RE: Woodview Avenue 1960 - by rowens - 07-13-2022, 10:43 AM
RE: Woodview Avenue 1960 - by TranquillityBase - 07-16-2022, 08:47 AM
RE: Woodview Avenue 1960 - by Mark A Becker - 07-22-2022, 12:36 AM
RE: Woodview Avenue 1960 - by Knot - 07-15-2022, 07:39 PM
RE: Woodview Avenue 1960 - by Mark A Becker - 07-22-2022, 06:41 AM
RE: Woodview Avenue 1960 - by TranquillityBase - 07-22-2022, 09:31 PM
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