07-02-2022, 07:30 AM
The only trip up, going back, is the word Hence. It's correct, if you take the time to consider.
You've thought about that.
I use hence all the time.
I wrote a reply to one of my poems that no one has commented on yet with the word Hence in it.
The act of the poem is orchestrated nicely.
You made the mistake of admitting your privy in orchestration.
(Your piano work is good and definitely not great. I found that the lingering hold on your greatest/greatness in those tracks you posted.) Far,
far superior than/to anything I've ever done in the music bizz, BUT NOT GOOD ENOUGH.
I am, from this date, July 1st, 2022, interested in your plight, your art, in life.
You brought this on yourself, now.
I pressed play on your classical bits, on rhythmical sections of my heart, playing them at once. In My own order of coming in. And that was something.
I enjoyed it. Despite that drAMATic line/break in my talk. I promise
I would n't talk to you about it like this in voice.
All my critiques of things worthwhile are like this.
And I'm talking about your music, not this poem.
It messes too much up to fix this poem. Huh?
You've thought about that.
I use hence all the time.
I wrote a reply to one of my poems that no one has commented on yet with the word Hence in it.
The act of the poem is orchestrated nicely.
You made the mistake of admitting your privy in orchestration.
(Your piano work is good and definitely not great. I found that the lingering hold on your greatest/greatness in those tracks you posted.) Far,
far superior than/to anything I've ever done in the music bizz, BUT NOT GOOD ENOUGH.
I am, from this date, July 1st, 2022, interested in your plight, your art, in life.
You brought this on yourself, now.
I pressed play on your classical bits, on rhythmical sections of my heart, playing them at once. In My own order of coming in. And that was something.
I enjoyed it. Despite that drAMATic line/break in my talk. I promise
I would n't talk to you about it like this in voice.
All my critiques of things worthwhile are like this.
And I'm talking about your music, not this poem.
It messes too much up to fix this poem. Huh?